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为什么在我们眼里学校生活是枯燥的？
【内容提示】
学生们谈起假日活动便眉飞色舞，说到回校上课就有点愁眉苦脸。为影封证希义类什么学生们不喜欢学校呢？因为学校生活太枯燥。请你写一篇文章，分析一下其中的原因。是因为学生们不喜欢上课呢，还是什么别的原因？
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WhySchoolIsDullinOurEyes
Wheneverwetalkaboutholidays,thereisalwaysaprettysmileonourfaces.Butwhenwerealizeourholidayswillsoonbeoverandwehavetoreturntoschool,wefeelabitsad.Thisisnotbecausewehatest专udy.Whatweha来自teisourdulllifeatschool.
Thescope①ofourschoollifeisnothingmorethanourschool,oreventhemuchsmallerclassroom.Everyday,everyterm,wehaveourlessonsinthesameclassroomrepeate换布都读成独dly.Wehavenochancetogetintouchwithsocietytoenrichourlife.Schoolisjustlikeacagethatbinds②ourthoughtsandbehaviors.Howcanw流通干才聚双eteenagersstayinacage?For事措展theteenagersitisjusttimethatourownc较花晚计兰地促袁haractersareformed.O犯联粮致乙官ne'scharactermustbemouldedthroughp360问答racticeandexperiences.Buttheschoolpassesusknowledgemerelyfromtextbook进板进配愿卷么呢山快离s.Andnostudentcanfreehims树眼elffromso行威manykindsofhomework.Canweformourcharacterinthisway?No,never!
Wecannotmakefreeuseofourtime.Everydayweareforcedtodowhatwedon'tliketodo.Everydaywehavetostudyforbetterscores.Wejustdon'twanttobeslavesofscores.Sometimeswedonotevenhavetimetoreadnewspapers脱存市想尔补械船.OnceIheardt诉爱部程情hatoneofus转正施触缩大环文去岁didnoteven转践识英激绍端族识井精knowwhoRonaldReagan③is.Butmostofourteachersatschoolthinkthatgood自夜阶scoresaremoreimportantthanstrongerch图伟新三证实技热九推aracters.Theyhighlypraisestu始诗烧岁怕晶走行夜苗dentswhoachievegoodscoresinsteadofpraisingthosewithstrongcharacters.
Allofushopethatlifeisbecomingricherandricher,andthescopeoflifemuchwider.Inschoolweshouldacquirenotonlyknowledge,butalsolearntounderstandnatureoflife.Ifschoollifeisfulloffunandinterests,Ibelievewewillenjoyschoollifemuchbetter.
【词语解释】
①scope[skup]n．范围；眼界
②bind[baind]v．捆；束缚
③RonaldReagan['r&nld'reign]罗纳德・里根（美国总统名）
【写法指要】
本文作者在引言段为自己立论“Whatwehateisourdulllifeatschool.”。接着，作者在正文中运用因果辩证关系对这一论点进行了直接论证。如果我们把“ourdulllifeatschool”看作结果的话，那么本文就是由结果推断原因了。作者根据自身的体验和学校存在的事实，分析出了两方面的原因：一是教学脱离实际、脱离社会，二是学校推行的是应试教育。最后，作者的结论是多姿多彩的学校生活才不会枯燥。
